Where to Start a StoryWhen to start a story
As one begins a story
to start a story. I have a question: There is one thing that can drag the readers into the story. Just keep in mind, don't ask silly questions like: When you really wanted, and if it's really related to history, it's okay, but try to do something like write: Then you have to respond to your questions at some point in the story, be it in the next or last phrase of your story.
Acting can be a very naughty way to start a story. I' ll start most of my tales with a description. This could start with something so simple: In general I like description. Well, I'd say description is one of the best ways to start a story. flashback:
Memos are very fiddly; if you don't use them correctly, it could be bewildering for the readers. When you start your story with a flashback or a vision, you need to be very cautious to make sure that it is clear when the vision of a Flashback begins and ends; there are only good and evil ones to start a story.
The difficulty of starting a story successfully with a vision
but I wasn't afraid. Amazingly wealthy, colorful Nonagone. As the man with the bluish tone said: "Nothing is true. This was no daydream. It was a carol played on the air that brought me to this place. There was a quiet music on the stereo next to my bedside.
She gave me the stereo because she knew it would help me fall asleep and I was allowed to wear it all evening as long as it wasn't too noisy. These are two of the most frequent warnings to be made to those who write fiction: Do not start a story with a person getting out of his or her beds.
"Gregor Samsa awoke from restless dreaming one day and turned into a huge bug in his crib. Augusto Monterroso also signed the obituaries of rule #1 and #2 in the briefest story in the underworld. They have their own logical reasoning, one that does not follow the rule and is therefore difficult to use.
Same goes for the best fiction: she makes her own set of precepts by making (in John Gardner's words) a "living and enduring dream". "And since a work of phantasy is already a personal fantasy, we are two steps away from our own life when we read about a fictitious one.
Nevertheless, dreaming has always been an important part of literary life. Raskolnikov of Crime and Punishment visits a boyhood period before murdering the pawnshop, in a fantasy that symbolizes the double character of the spirit, riven between blood lust and comforts. He watches a group of farmers beating an old man to his deaths.
So what's Alice's mirror but a door to her dream? Francine Prose wrote in "Chasing the White Rabbit", her beautiful essays on fictitious dreams: The world of music is full of fantasies that we recall more clearly than our own. In Shakespeare's play, our own desires go as far as our own, and the wicked are often penalized in their sleep before paying for their deeds.
One of the problems with dreaming is that, often it sounds synthetic when it' s expressed in clear, streamlined diction. No matter what material the dream is made of, words are not. "That may be the reason why writers are writing the best dreams: they are better at making these unlikely jumps. However, a larger issue with fictitious dreaming is that they ask us to make an emotional effort to make this initial effort null and vain only when it turns out that the experiment has not been "real" by awakening anyhow.
" In the same way as I get anxious in my own lifetime when someone pits me with his dreams, I always rush my feelings when I come across a fantasy in a novel or a story. Damn, it's just a fucking nightmare. But on the other side, when the fantasy turns out to be reality (like this one here) and I am investing in it just to find out that it never really has, like every lure and change lure, I am deceived.
This is a pretty good representation of the nightmare itself, full of sensual, idiosyncratic detail that provides a lively fictive adventure (the "trembling" winding instrument; the man who is singing with a "blue" voice," the escaping merry-go-rounders racing over hills). Although lively, it is also rich in jumps and non-sequences that mark true dreaming.
So I can't help but feel frustrated when I learnt that, as the track says, "nothing is real". This was all just a nightmare triggered by a track on the air. Perhaps the nightmare has a symbolism; perhaps it will echo and/or return to the end of the story and win back my outlay.
And I also believe that this is the best place to be. Maybe the point of the nightmare and the radios that (quietly) play the tune that inspired it is to underline the protagonist's anxiety about the darkness and - maybe again - about the nights she had, not about good nights like this, but about the nights that frightened her so much that she was asleep.
So how else can a mom let her kid listen to the wireless all doomsday? However, if the writer's carnivalist way of enticing us into her fictitious realm is only a mere daydream, then I know nothing about you, but I want my emotive deposition back.