Tips for Writing your first novelWriting your first novel
It' s interesting, we all like it, but if it was more interesting than the storyline, it would be the storyline!
A hint of how it was better "before we were drawn into this world". It has to be something a person would say or think at the time.
As you get nearer to the readers' own experiences, they will find it easier to capture your text and immerse themselves in it.