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The Three Paragraphs Kurzgeschichte "Bloodstains in Our Eyes"
For the brevity of the history, I am sorry I did not make that clear. As you said, you tried to make it brief, so it was more a cute, brief reading, like those five-minute caricatures between shows on TV. it's there, relish it, it gets a great deal done in a small amount of time.your major edition, I believe, is that it was somewhat rushed. chatter.
You' ve condensed the plot a little too much and therefore omitted a few things (like a more descriptive account of the "demons"), I'm not sure how to work out a plot and still keep it brief. You may use thought-provoking rhetoric that really makes the readers think, use contradictions, metaphor, parables, hyperpoles, etc., but don't be annoyed, the readers get headaches after a while.
Such things really make the readers scratches their heads and drag them into the stories, but you have to be wary that you don't rely on such equipment, because then the readers just drop it. What is said above tells, it is brief, it is clear, it makes the readers asleep.
It' the same news, but in the end the readers are farsighted and interested. To return to history, I would like to say the following: It' s an astonishing storyline, make it a full storyline, please. They conveyed the good news, the whole thing was clear and fun.
Make a 3 step storyline!
"Poindexter" Dexter Poindexter came home to see his new computer. Her mother was smiling because she knew that her 42-year-old virginal boy was desperate to join the online fellowship, spending a small sum of money to get it for him, because he himself could barely afford to buy it for Burger KIng Kochgeld.
"Well, my boy makes me proud, here's a great opportunity to speak to someone who agrees with everything you say and will always like you". It was Dexter smiling at the thought as the noise of the login could be heared. I' m going to make another one for the other heels. I' m still scared of losing postings after it was a few years ago when I made a long topic.