How to begin a Short StoryBeginning a short story
Like starting a story: Write the character's journey to the first page
Where and how do I start my history? This turns out to be less a matter of time and place than a time in the main character's lifetime when the trip to the answers to a quest begins. When reviewing, revising and criticising, the reader will often reply to tales that reflect this structure: "I think your tale actually begins on page 34.
When you start a new novel this November or struggle to rework your first sequence, I urge you to rethink your mind and get closer to the beginning of your storyline, as if you were going to write your character's trip to the first page - until the point when his biography overlaps with the storyline of your novel.
It was meant to explore and extricate the critical parts of the background history needed to start your storyline - but that doesn't entirely fit into the first few pages. All in all, trouble. When you have a storyline that' s more likely to be told, your characters will want something, and they have to go on a trip to reach it, at great peril and with substantial effort, while being confronted with an obstacle that is in their way of reaching it.
In the course of their life, their troubles - doubt, restrictions, unrealised hopes, fears, fears - have hindered them from at last pursuing what they want. They' have left their mark on everything your personality is and does up to this point - and will affect how it moves forward.
After all, it is the problem and the fight to transcend the limits imposed by them that trigger empiricism in the readers. So, as you write your character's voyage to the first page, concentrate on these issues - and their roots - to evolve the wealthy wallpaper that will determine your character's rapprochement to theirs.
When you do this, you will find that the choices your characters make as the action progresses - and the exact way they make those choices - are built on the lives they have lived up to that point. Her past becomes the greatest impact on her later. View a reworked vignette with the following questions:
When the action begins, what kind of problem does your personality have? So what was the cause of these issues? What influence did these issues have on your personality? If they hadn't stopped your personality from getting what he wanted, how could they have? What did the answer to all these questions lead your characters to exactly the point at which your action begins (your action should begin when there is no other option but for your characters to begin their quest for change)?
The Things they is one of my favourite shorts - and perhaps one of the most popular of all times - and it's The Things they of Tim O'Brien. It follows a train during the Vietnam Wars and describes the things that each of them carries, from items and arms to feelings of doubts, anxiety and ardor.
One of the many explanations why this storyline is so mighty is that it gives the readers a better idea of why the protagonists are the way they are and does the things they do in the storyline (and thus the storyline drives them). The Things They is not only a nice, strong tale, but also a fine example of what a novelist could concentrate on when he brings a character's trip to page one to live.
You find this thing, reading it and studying it. It proves that you don't need to know your character's full background history - you just need to know what your characters are carrying. Understanding this in your hands, its meaning and its might, you will be prepared to begin the point in your character's history where the action begins.